An Analysis of “Bartleby the Scrivener” by Herman Melville
“Bartleby the Scrivener” is a very descriptive tale of a lawyer and his clerks. The lawyer, the narrator of the story, is never named but all of his clerks have very interesting nick names that are used throughout the story. Turkey, Nippers, and Ginger Nut are his office helpers in this story. They are very temperamental and moody, but the narrator doesn’t seem to mind them, in fact he seems to embrace them. He sets a scene that takes place on Wall Street, in a law office of ordinary circumstances. In walks a new clerk, introduces himself and becomes one of the office workers. His name is Bartleby; he is the hero of Melville’s story in his refusal to participate in a workplace that represents the sad, dreary atmosphere of a bureaucratic, industrialized society.
“Bartleby the Scrivener” is a very descriptive tale of a lawyer and his clerks. The lawyer, the narrator of the story, is never named but all of his clerks have very interesting nick names that are used throughout the story. Turkey, Nippers, and Ginger Nut are his office helpers in this story. They are very temperamental and moody, but the narrator doesn’t seem to mind them, in fact he seems to embrace them. He sets a scene that takes place on Wall Street, in a law office of ordinary circumstances. In walks a new clerk, introduces himself and becomes one of the office workers. His name is Bartleby; he is the hero of Melville’s story in his refusal to participate in a workplace that represents the sad, dreary atmosphere of a bureaucratic, industrialized society.
The
narrator, a simple man, prefers the path of least resistance. ”I am a man who, from his youth upwards, has been filled with
a profound conviction that the easiest way of life is the best”
(Melville). He doesn’t get much
attention for his work. There aren’t any
high profile criminal cases that he works on.
His life is that of men’s finances and wills. This thankless job is one that pays well, but
doesn’t have much personal satisfaction.
He is the boss, and the office workers are his minions.
While the narrator is content with
his life’s ambitions, his helpers seem displeased. One way they show this is in their behavior. Turkey and Nippers, both have temperamental
attitudes that vary in time with their onset.
Turkey has his during the morning times, Nippers has his during the
afternoon. Just like at the DMV, moodiness
is common place in this work environment.
Menial tasks seem to grind away at their souls leading to swings in the
characters’ behaviors depending on the time of day. Depression is one manifestation when one is not
happy with their situation, and usually follows with moodiness. It seems as though the office workers don’t
like the tasks they have to do, but because of financial obligations they have
to do those tasks. This in turn leads to
them being unhappy with the job, and bouts of regular moodiness.
Bartleby has an entrance that is
stellar in the eyes of the narrator. ”At
first Bartleby did an extraordinary quantity of writing. “As if long famishing
for something to copy, he seemed to gorge himself on my documents no pause for
digestion. He ran a day and night line, copying by sun-light and by
candle-light….But he wrote on silently, palely, mechanically” (Melville). The narrator loves the quality and the
quantity of his work, but it seems even in the beginning Bartleby realizes the nonexistent
value of the job. He too most likely has
financial obligations that he has to worry about, so he plods along as if he
were a robot attaching caps to a tube full of tooth paste.
Bartleby worked hard for a while, but one day the narrator asks him to
review some papers with him. The narrator
states himself that “it is a very dull, wearisome, and lethargic affair.” Bartleby replies with his famous statement,
“I would prefer not to” (Melville). This
statement would become the single most used phrase that Bartleby speaks
throughout the whole story. From the
beginning he doesn’t want to participate in the work place’s useless
tasks. One can’t assume why he took the
job in the first place, but from the beginning he states calmly that he doesn’t
want to do menial duties that the lawyer asks him to do. Is he too good for them? Is he looking to make the narrator and the
other office workers mad? These questions
are hard to answer, because Bartleby really doesn’t speak much in the
story. Maybe he is the embodiment of the
narrator’s feelings towards his work, but Melville leaves most of Bartleby’s character
up for interpretation by the reader.
Once Bartleby has cemented his
position, the narrator looks to others for help. He asks Turkey, Nippers, and Ginger Nut if
Bartleby’s position is ludicrous. The
three of them, being entrenched in the daily office work, as well as dependent
on the money, agree with the lawyer. Any
person that has a superior that they are dependent on will agree with most
anything they say. In the end, someone
has to do the work so the narrator and the other office helpers take Bartleby’s
share of the unpleasant responsibilities. This is a shift of responsibility is
somewhat unusual. Most employers would
terminate an employee that is blatantly defiant. The narrator has a special place in his heart
for Bartleby, because of his industriousness and gentle attitude.
The same situation happens over and
over again. Bartleby is assigned a
menial task, then he utters the same phrase “I would prefer not to” (Melville).
His refusal is consistent with his determination to not do these duties. It is Bartleby showing his boss that he will
not be brought down to a basic level. He
is above these things that his overseer asks, tells, and then demands.
Bartleby determined to not work resigns
himself to looking at the brick wall through the window. The office is like a cage holding Bartleby
captive. His glare out the window shows
his longing for better places, but is obstructed by the wall outside, much like
the Berlin Wall holding people captive in a place they didn’t want to be. It is a symbol of the drab surroundings, and
the wall that he will hit if he tries to get loose.
Bartleby’s apparent lack of
industriousness towards the end of the story infuriates the narrator. He believes that this was meant to
happen. His work is of so little worth
that someone is supposed to come in and show him what is apparent even to him. In the end, the narrator runs away from this
realization. He decides to leave the
place that is occupied by the reminder of his situation. He abandons the place where Bartleby is holding
his proverbial ground. Because of
Bartleby’s attachment to the office he ends up in real captivity. This is the narrator locking away his
feelings of disappointment towards his work.
Melville paints a picture of
Bartleby dying a lonely death, giving us the example that those who stand up
for their beliefs will have the same fate.
Hopefully, no one ends up in the situation that Bartleby and his bureaucratic
boss are living through. They both have
issues with what they are doing in their lives; the narrator is fine with his station
and worth. Bartleby is a different story;
he isn’t happy with it and decides to show his displeasure in a passive
aggressive way. Bartleby’s actions aren’t
justified by the way that he was treated, but he does show that displeasure can
be shown by doing absolutely nothing.
Works
Cited
Melville, Herman.
"Bartleby, the Scrivener: A Story of Wall-street." Bartleby. N.p., 2011. Web.
25 Feb 2012. <http://www.bartleby.com/129/>.
Chad, You have done a very good job of summarizing. This story is so much clearer the way you have told it. I have no idea what your thesis statement is. What is your point of view? How are you going to back it up? Ms. Cline has given us several thesis statement to use they are hard to find you have to go back to assignment 3 they are under the analysis instruction. I hope this information is helpful to you.
ReplyDeleteChad, you had a good paper. I also had the same perspective and thesis statement that you chose. I found your paper easy to read and clear, unlike the story itself. I think that more in text citations would help support your thesis. I also think that contractions should not be used for a paper like this. For others who have different perspectives than us on this story, it might be helpful to add in more detail and depth in regards to Bartleby's actions.
ReplyDeleteChad,
ReplyDeleteThe essay you wrote is in great shape but could use a bit of improvement. I agree with your thought process regarding the narrator’s outlook on work. The easiest way is not always the best and this type of morale certainly leads to a dreary and industrious work environment. I enjoyed your comparison of the office to a cage. Bartleby does seem to be longing for a better existence when he stares at the brick wall through his window. I don’t agree that Bartleby is passive aggressive. He definitely is passive but seems more resistive than aggressive. I am not sure if Bartleby has financial obligations. After all, he lives in the office, eats basically nothing, and needs very little in terms of material goods. One suggestion I will make, is to reference your thesis more throughout the essay. Also, I would consider briefly mentioning the ideas you are using to support your thesis in your introductory paragraph. Great work.
-Aaron